Every Breath You Take v2

vvribeiro 816

Every breath you take,
Every run you make.
Every small mistake,
Every sub you break,
I'll be tagging you.

Every single turn,
When you think you're safe.
Hunting you all day,
Accept your fate.
I'll be tagging you.

Oh can't you see,
It all belongs to me?
In your car things break,
An accident I fake.

Every click you waste,
Paying two to escape.
Every look you take,
In a server made.
I'll be tagging you.

When you encounter my ice, I'll start a trace,
I'll be smiling as a tear runs down your face.
You'll look around as your luck begins to flake.
You'll take a tag as I wait for the next phase.
The earth burning baby, and you're deceased.

Oh can't you see,
It all belongs to me.
How your poor head aches
With my speeding pace

Every credit you take,
Every choice you make.
Every tear you shake,
Every started trace,
I'll be tagging you.

Every card I play,
Every step I take,
I'll be tagging you.

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Thank you all for the feedback! The deck looks better now, but your comments are always welcome!

3 comments
16 Jul 2015 linuxmaier

Looks more solid :) Let us know how it goes.

16 Jul 2015 DarkTsunder

Great song remix. Well done! Nothing to add that wasn't covered in the comments for v1.

16 Jul 2015 Sarmatian

This write up is spectacular!